I'm doing English to Latin translation and wanted to know if anyone could help me address the mistakes of my translation:
Who is there who would allow the city walls to be destroyed on account of the treachery of a few disloyal men? If our soldiers fight bravely, the city will not fall!
Quis est qui patiatur moenias delenda sunt pro insidiam pauci impiorum hominibus? Si nostri milites pugnabunt fortitier, urbs non cadet.