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I want to riff off the famous saying "those about to die salute you".

According to wikipedia the original is:

"Ave, Imperator, morituri te salutant" ("Hail, Emperor, those who are about to die salute you")

I want to change it to "Hail, Project Manager, those who are about to sprint salute you"

The best I could come up with is:

"Ave, Vilicus Operis, concitī te salutant"

But it seems totally wrong.

Anyone have a better translation?

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  • Do you want a word that literally means "sprint"? Obviously, that verb in Latin wouldn't contain the meanings that the word has in the software industry. – brianpck Mar 15 '17 at 23:48
  • @brianpck "sprint", "scramble", ...something that indicates effort and drive,.. – Alex Kinman Mar 16 '17 at 0:17
  • To indicate 'strive', why not use nitor (future participle nisurus or nixurus)? And I don't think that vilicus is quite right (unless you have a freedman in charge of you wage-slaves!). – Tom Cotton Mar 16 '17 at 6:35
  • I'm not sure there is a good Latin word for "sprint" in this meaning (which I had never seen before!). I would suggest something as dull as laboraturi te salutant, "those about to work salute you". If you go with vilicus, it should be in the vocative case here: vilice. Perhaps: Ave, vilice, laboraturi te salutant. – Joonas Ilmavirta Mar 16 '17 at 7:53
  • @Joonas Do you think cursuri works? – brianpck Mar 16 '17 at 11:58
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I think the operis is unnecessary, but vilicus is subversively delightful. It means "overseer," and was often used for the slave who oversaw the field-working slaves. (Ecce Romani folk would remember Davus, the vilicus Cornelii qui Getam verberat.) I really like the connotation there.

My main issue is concieo is that it's transitive. I think you're better off with a word like festinare or properare, both meaning "to hurry [yourself]". The former has a nice Latin proverb that would complement it: festina lente, "hurry slowly." Essentially, do whatever you're doing as fast as you can, but not so fast that you are making mistakes doing so.

This would give you:

Ave Vilice, festinaturi te salutant.

Edit: I should mention, since you have it in your original, that for 2nd declension nouns ending in -us, the vocative (i.e. when they are being addressed) ending is -e, not -us. If it's -ius, then it ends in -i. Imperator doesn't follow that pattern, so it doesn't change, but vilicus does, so that's why you have to have ave vilice and not ave vilicus.

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