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I've seen progressio used as a part in a story which progresses the plot, but is there a word for a moment with action and conflict that determines the outcome of the story, or a crucial time for a character to make a decision? Any related terms are welcome, preferably in Classical Latin.

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The word you are looking for is gradatio, -onis, (f.), the Latin equivalent of κλιμαξ, used by Cicero, for example, de Or. 3, 54, 207,

Est etiam gradatio quaedam et conversio et verborum concinna transgressio et contrarium et dissolutum et declinatio etc. . .

[EDIT] This use of gradatio has been deprecated in comments. An alternative has yet to be put forward, possibly because none is known.

Any modern translation into Latin almost inevitably has deviations from classical usage — something which is often not fully appreciated. For example, a change of subject as the sentence proceeds may occur more often than a pedant might consider strictly proper. It has also to be recognised that style is one thing, and idiom another, and that it is sometimes necessary in some way to transform both — as in the present case, when a deficiency of vocabulary has to be remedied. In some such cases an existing word can be used, if the translator feels that it can be adapted sensibly. In the end, a successful translation has to be a compromise between accuracy and readability. Vitruvius uses gradatio for a series of (stone) tiers. Cicero, in the absence of a precise Latin term, adapts the physical idea—'steps' in the most literal sense — to a rhetorical use. I have proposed adapting gradatio to the result of a sequence of occurences, or what can be called in ordinary language a 'climax'. I repeat what I replied to one of the comments : if a more convincing suggestion were to be put forward, I should accept it enthusiastically.

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    Gradatio seems not to mean the climax of a plot but a specific rhetorical device in which successive clauses linked by shared vocabulary ascend in importance by degrees: e.g. (quoted in L&S s.v.) Nam quae reliqua spes manet libertatis, si illis et quod libet, licet; et quod licet, possunt; et quod possunt, audent; et quod audent, faciunt; et quod faciunt, vobis molestum non est? – TKR Feb 5 '17 at 22:36
  • (Btw the quote seems to be from Quintilian, not Cicero) – TKR Feb 6 '17 at 0:27
  • @TKR I think you'll find that Quintilian at Inst. III 36 indicates that he is quoting from that passage by Cicero, at some length. I spent some time on the word about thirty years ago: Vitruvius uses it not rhetorically, but to describe something like a rising set of tiers : all in all, the word seems appropriate to answer the question, as I hope you might agree? – Tom Cotton Feb 6 '17 at 6:30
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    Agreed with @TKR. Climax here refers to a rhetorical device, with an example given in L&S. It has a different meaning in the context of literary progression: in fact "gradatio" seems a good word for "rising action," which precedes the climax. – brianpck Feb 6 '17 at 15:11
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    @brianpck Well of course Cicero is using it as a rhetorical device. Would you say the same of Vitruvius, who uses it for physical description (V. 3, passim) ? If you are able to provide something better, please feel to do so : I shan't be offended! Otherwise, I should be satisfied to call it a metonym for climax in the meaning asked for. hoc gradatione perfecta, . . ., etc., 'having got to a climax . . .' – Tom Cotton Feb 6 '17 at 17:13

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